Scrapped bits of dialogue, from early outlines. Some of the plot lines were dropped, altered, or delayed, for use later:
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T: Aren't you supposed to be shuffling into the mortal coil?
M: Still negotiating the whole 'don't wanna be a tortoise' thing.
T: How's that going?
M: Learning to love the lettuce.
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T: Yeah? How many times does someone have to tell you to go to Hell before it spontaneously happens?
B: I'll be sure to let you know after I figure out the tootsie roll pop thing.
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Maybe I can't use them now, but later, maybe I'll be able to use pieces of the exchange to punch up a scene. And if all else fails, the next time someone says I'm going to hell, I'll reference tootsie roll pops. Because who wouldn't be stopped in their tracks by that?!
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